Saturday, June 5, 2010

Perfect times !!

Wanna forget evrything n start anew ..
crazy memories pull me behind ..
Free times make matters worse
n i cant help but be slave of my mind..

Can I lie well enough to find a getaway..
an escape door which saves me from my dream..
to not rmember ppl who touched me in their own ways..
n gave me unforgettable memories in a life so short n grim

But forget I will ;those perfect times
Sun will lose its light and water won't wet my eyes
Leaves turn yellow early this summer
and yet clock still runs n I run behind

4 comments:

  1. Loved the first para.. found the next 2 paras very abstract and cant exactly figure out what you wanna say even after pondering over them for like a half hour.. care to elucidate a little bit..? :)

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  2. about the poem .. well
    the 2nd para is about the dreams that haunt me
    these ppl come in those
    n make me feel drained
    I kinda miss them more in my sleep
    those dreams mess with me
    so I want to escape my dreams
    3rd para.. is about the inevitability where i forget those times
    where I know even nature changes its course n so wud my psyches
    n even when I do forget them I will still run behind the time
    cos thats what life is
    what i mean is one day nature will force me to forget .. I want it or not..

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  3. I find this as a brief expression of what You have shared with me during your separation. I like the
    following phrases "slave of my mind", "ppl who touched me in their own ways".

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  4. @Raja.. yes maybe u r the best person who understands it .. u know it :)

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